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1 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 00 S 0 P L Park, Sungkwon urrently, the PL in the I P802.3cg 10SP standard gives equal opportunity to all nodes. However, this may be fair in terms of equity, but it is inefficient if there are nodes that will not transmit data. It needs to be fixed with a new PL transmission opportunity cycle. he technology we will be proposing can be applied within the I P802.3cg standard by approaching only from a design point of view within the OSI layer 1 (Such as circuit design using FPG programming). When 10SP is fist applied to the vehicle, the node with the highest priority will be the brake and airbag control related node. However, unlike traditional N protocol, there is no way to manage priority in thernet. In order to make the automotive thernet into priority issues like N, the existing PL cycle shall be transformed into a way to give higher priority to higher priority nodes. We have the idea of changing the number of transmission opportunity slots in one cycle according to the number of nodes existing in one network and rearranging high priority nodes accordingly. Our idea is only an alternative to addressing priority issues within the OSI layer he prerequisite is to assign PHY IDs in order of priority. 2. If N nodes are present in the network, the objective of this proposal is to build up N-1 transmission opportunity cycles in advance so that higher priority nodes are allocated more transmission opportunities. For example: he sum of the number of transmission opportunities of PHY 0 and PHY 1 in the proposed technology is S. he number of PHY = N When N = 3, S = 5 * N - 11 (+1) = 5 * N - 10 = 5 When N > 4, S = (5 * N-11) times In conclusion, S = 5 for N = 3 and S = (5 * N-11) for N > 4. he sum of the number of transmission opportunities of PHY 0 and PHY 1 in the existing PL is S. When N > 2, S = 2 * (N - 1) times lim (5 * N - 11) / 2 * (N - 1) = 2.5 hat is, PHY 0 and PHY 1 have transmission opportunities of about 2.5 times as much as those of the existing PL method. P IN PRINIPL. Resolved by 324 Status Hanyang University an 494 Very Late dopt text changes as in beruto_3cg_pl_burst_mode_revb.pdf slides from 7 to 15. Update PIS accordingly l 00 S 0 P L Park, Sungkwon omment 573' suggested a priority application method that includes up to OSI layer 2 in addition to the OSI layer 1. However, since I 802.3cg is a layer 1-based standard, the solution also needs to be limited to OSI layer 1. We suggest that PL priority issues discussed in 'omment 573' can be solved by limiting to OSI layer 1. he technology we propose is as follows. When there is a transmission opportunity allocated to each node in the existing PL transmission cycle, each node may have an idle time slot according to the M layer transmission state before data transmission. However, in our proposed technique, this IDL time slot is forcibly allocated for each transmission opportunity of each PHY. he specific PHY (PHY with high priority) uses a kind of signal because PHY needs to inform the network of the critical data transfer request (we will use LPI signaling). For this purpose, any one PHY with high priority must have capability, and the PHY must be able to transmit its own LPI signal. o do this, several flows of the state diagram of existing standard documents need to be modified. he PHY that has received the LPI Signaling has an existing transmission opportunity, yields the transmission opportunity to the PHY having the higher priority, waits until the transmission is completed, and acquires the transmission opportunity again (In Figure PL ontrol state diagram of 802.3cg/D2.1). Figure PL Data state diagram also needs to be revised as described above. Our proposed technique uses Signaling in OSI layer 1, so there is no need for additional instance, and only flow for priority transmission is added to the state diagram. However, a node having a priority order can be preset in the system design, and can have the transmission right only in the corresponding node. onsidering a node that generates safety-related data such as a brake or an airbag, two priority nodes may be sufficient. P IN PRINIPL. Resolved by 324 Resolution to comment 324 is: dopt text changes as in beruto_3cg_pl_burst_mode_revb.pdf slides from 7 to 15. Update PIS accordingly Status Hanyang University an 493 Very Late Resolution to comment 324 is: YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa Li Page 1 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

2 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 98 S P L 37 Bains, mrik isco Systems IN 482 l 00 S 0 P 1 L 31 Wienckowski, Natalie General Motors Varibables defined after state machines Move section before and re-number Status P IN PRINIPL. Move anchor for Figure after Late 802.3cb-201x and 802.3bt-201x were changed on page 11, but they also need to be changed on page 1. lso on line 2. hange 802.3cb-201x to 802.3cb-2018 and 802.3bt-201x to 802.3bt P. Status Z l 00 S 0 P 0 L 0 [SY] hroughout the document the page numbers use different fonts and font sizes. Unify font types and sizes within the draft document. P. Status l 00 S FM P 1 L 1 Yseboodt, Lennart Draft 2.1 does not contain change bars. hange bars are a good way to indicate where changes have happened and which parts of the draft are in scope. Include change bars for D2.2 and drafts going forward. RJ. Signify Status R Z ditorial l 00 S 0 P 8 L 16 Law, David Please add the list of Working Group members for the I P802.3cg ballot supplied by the I Working Group hair. See comment. P. HP Status l 01 S P 25 L 8 Regev, lon ":." should be ":" change ":." to ":" in this line. P. Status Keysight echnologies Z Z hange bars are shown in the MP (compare) file and are not required in the clean draft. With multiple editors, the only way to be sure that revisions are marked correctly is to use the FrameMaker compare tool and the generated MP.pdf file. l 01 S P 25 L 20 Law, David HP Please move the text 'PHY' to be centre aligned with the squiggly brackets. 467 Z See comment. P. Status YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 25 Li 20 Page 2 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

3 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 01 S P 25 L 24 smussen, Jes Rockwell utomation 396 l 01 S P 25 L 24 nslow, Pete iena 86 Spelling error "10BS-1L" Z "10BS-1L" should be "10BS-1L" Z hange to "10BS-1L" hange "10BS-1L" to "10BS-1L" P. Status P. Status Master comment 86. Resolve with 86, 22, 466, 189, and 442. Master comment 86. Resolve with 22, 466, 189, 396, and 442. l 01 S P 25 L 24 Zimmerman, George M onsulting et al 22 l 01 S P 25 L 24 smussen, Jes Rockwell utomation 397 typo in figure change "10BS-1L, 10BS-1S" Z Is >= 100 Mb/s correct since it also references 10BS-1L & 10BS-1S? ditorial change 10BS-1L to 10BS-1L hange to >=10 Mb/s P. Status Status P IN PRINIPL. Master comment 86. Resolve with 86, 466, 189, 396, and 442. Replace, ">= 100 Mb/s, 10BS-1L, 10BS-1S" l 01 S P 25 L 24 Law, David HP Please change '10BS-1L' to read '10BS-1L'. See comment. Status P. Master comment 86. Resolve with 86, 22, 189, 396, and Z with, "10BS-1L, 10BS-1S, and >= 100 Mb/s" l 01 S P 25 L 24 [SY] 10BS-1L 10BS-1L Status P. 189 Z Master comment 86. Resolve with 86, 22, 466, 396, and 442. YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 25 Li 24 Page 3 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

4 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 01 S P 25 L 25 Brandt, David Rockwell utomation 442 l 01 S P 25 L 31 nslow, Pete iena 85 ypo in Figure 1-1 hange "10BS-1L" to "10BS-1L" P. Status Master comment 86. Resolve with 86, 22, 466, 189, and 396. Z he note at the foot of Figure 1-1 says "the xmii is used as a generic term for the Media Independent Interfaces for implementations of 100 Mb/s and above." but this term is now being used for 10BS-1L and 10BS-1S hange the note to be consistent with the modified figure. P IN PRINIPL. Status ditorial l 01 S P 25 L 30 Brandt, David Note specifies xmii in diagram is only for 100 Mb/s and above. dd 10BS-1L and 10BS-1S. P IN PRINIPL. Status Master comment 443. Resolve with 85. Replace, "Interfaces for implementations of 100 Mb/s and above." Rockwell utomation with, "Interfaces for implementations of 10BS-1L and 10BS-1S and 100 Mb/s and above." 443 ditorial Master comment 443. Resolve with 443. Replace, "Interfaces for implementations of 100 Mb/s and above." with, "Interfaces for implementations of 10BS-1L and 10BS-1S and 100 Mb/s and above." l 01 S 1.3 P 25 L 41 nslow, Pete I references in the in-force standard have an em dash in front of "Part" with no spaces on either side. iena For all of the I references being added replace " - " before "Part" with an em dash with no spaces before and after. For I references containing additional " - " separators, replace " - " with an em dash with no spaces before and after. 87 Z P. Status YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 25 Li 41 Page 4 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

5 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 01 S 1.3 P 25 L 54 Maguire, Valerie he Siemon ompany 75 l 01 S 1.3 P 26 L 12 Regev, lon Keysight echnologies 15 dd standards reference for the non-mi1 interface to the normative references. MDI missing space after comma between "2018," and "lectromagnetic" Z dd, "I :201x, onnectors for lectrical and lectronic omponents - Product Requirements - Part 6: Detail specification for 2-way and 4-way (data/power), shielded, free and fixed high density connectors for transmission capability and power supply capability with frequency up to 600 MHz" and, "ditor's note (to be removed prior to publication), I (formerly I ) is still in development. he publication date will need to be inserted and the document title and number confirmed." before the entry for ISO 4892:1982. hange "I :2018,lectromagnetic compatibility" o "I :2018, lectromagnetic compatibility" P. Status P IN PRINIPL. Resolved by comment 80. Resolution to comment 80 is: Status l 01 S 1.3 P 26 L 27 [SY]. use -M requirements Z Insert new normative references: "I : 201x onnectors for electrical and electronic components - Product requirements - Part 3-125: onnectors - Detail specification for 2-way and 4-way (data/power), shielded, free and fixed connectors for transmission capability and power supply capability with frequencies up to 600 MHz.". use - M requirements. (add space before M) P. Status and, "ditor's note (to be removed prior to publication), I is still in development. he publication date will need to be inserted and the document title and number confirmed." after the entry for I :2017. l 01 S 1.9 P 26 L 12 Fritsche, Matthias space sign between "I :2018,lectromagnetic" is missing HRING echnology orrected reference: "I :2018, lectromagnetic compatibility (M) - Part 6-4: Generic standards - mission standard for industrial environments." 84 Z l 01 S 1.3 P 26 L 36 Maguire, Valerie Incorrect punctuation. Replace "," with "." at the end of the reference for I :201x. P. Status Master comment 76. Resolve with 191. he Siemon ompany 76 Z P. Status YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 26 Li 36 Page 5 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

6 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 01 S 1.3 P 26 L 36 [SY]. cabling,. cabling. (replace comma by dot). P. Status Master comment 76. Resolve with 76. l 01 S 1.3 P 26 L 41 Fritsche, Matthias R he 10BS-1L link segment is defined for industrial use cases. I802.3 ask I 42 and ISO/I S25 WG3 via Liaison letter regarding a proposal for SP connectors. t the last I 42 meeting in Mesa Oct also I finish the connector selection and we have a consistent result from both cabling standardisation groups with "L style" according to I and the "Industrial style" according to I o complete the I 802.3cg this "Industrial style" SP connector must be added for the industrial M2I222 and M3I333 applications. Insert new normative references: "I : 201x onnectors for electrical and electronic components - Product requirements - Part 3-125: onnectors - Detail specification for 2-way and 4-way (data/power), shielded, free and fixed connectors for transmission capability and power supply capability with frequencies up to 600 MHz." Status HRING echnology P IN PRINIPL. Insert new normative references: "I : 201x onnectors for electrical and electronic components - Product requirements - Part 3-125: onnectors - Detail specification for 2-way and 4-way (data/power), shielded, free and fixed connectors for transmission capability and power supply capability with frequencies up to 600 MHz." and, "ditor's note (to be removed prior to publication), I is still in development. he publication date will need to be inserted and the document title and number confirmed." Z MDI l 01 S a P 26 L 53 nslow, Pete ccording to the rules set out in: "In text, where this improves clarity, follow the I ditorial Style Manual: Use spaces instead of commas between numbers in tens or hundreds of thousands (e.g., , , but 4000)." he space in "1 000 m" is not in line with this. hange "1 000 m" to "1000 m" P. iena Status l 01 S 1.4 P 27 L 2 [SY] 15m 15 m (add space) P. Status l 01 S a P 27 L 5 nslow, Pete In the editing instruction, "I Std 802.3bt-201x" should not split across two lines. use a non-breaking hyphen (sc - h) P. iena Status Z Z Z after the entry for I :2017. YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 27 Li 5 Page 6 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

7 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 01 S a P 27 L 10 hompson, Geoff GraaSI S.. R Market BS does not belong in the definition Remove the words: "and improve performance" Status P. 331 l 22 S 22 P 29 L Kim, Yong NIO ditorial he proposed changes to this clause are at odds with the approved RD. ompatibility says "s a PHY amendment to I Std 802.3, the proposed project will use MII, and follow the existing format and structure..." When we voted for this RD, it exactly that. Use [existing] MII. It does not say the project will change MII to fit its needs. If in absurdity that is what was meant, then the whole "compatibility" criteria would be meaningless and irrevent. omment 658 from WG ballot is related to this comment but not the same. ll 802.3cg PHYs should operate with MII as defined as-is meaning that they work with MII prior to any technical changes proposed in L22 of the 802.3cg draft. nd reflect any downstream changes to the PIS table. Status RJ. No consensus to change R Very Late Presentation heard. [MSR OMMN] onsidered with 498, 499, 500, 501, 502 as a single issue Straw Poll 10: P comments 497, 498, 499, 500, 501, and 502 Suggested remedy for omment 497: ll 802.3cg PHYs should operate with MII as defined as-is meaning that they work with MII prior to any technical changes proposed in L22 of the 802.3cg draft. nd reflect any downstream changes to the PIS table. Suggested remedy for ll others: Reverse the change and all 802.3cg PHYs should operate with MII as defined prior to any changes proposed by 802.3cg draft. nd reflect any downstream changes to the PIS table. Y: 2 N: 21 : 13 Straw Poll 11: I support a resolution of RJ - No consensus to change. Y:29 N:2 :1 Motion 7: Reject comments no consensus to change. M: had Jones YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 29 Li 1 Page 7 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

8 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of S: Gergely Huszak Y: 30 N: 3 : 4 echnical Motion Passes. l 22 S P 29 L 20 Slavick, Jeff Broadcom lause 148 defines the behavior of BON and OMMI 71 ditorial l 22 S P 29 L 14 Kim, Yong he text deleted "Other values shall.. upon the PHY" and re-inserted after the new 3rd and 4th paragraph, changing the entire meaning of what is covered by the "Other values of shall. upon the PHY". nd changing the conformance condition. Reverse the change and all 802.3cg PHYs should operate with MII as defined prior to any changes proposed by 802.3cg draft. nd reflect any downstream changes to the PIS table. RJ. No consensus to change NIO Status R 498 Very Late hange "as explained in " to "as defined in ". Status P. l 22 S P 29 L 20 [SY] (too small font size) (adjust font size as for normal text) Status P. 193 Z onsider with 497 MSR comment and presentation. l 22 S P 29 L 18 Slavick, Jeff References to PL are made in this section but no mapping to the register control bits/status to know if it's an active feature or not is supplied. dd (see f.1 and e.3) after "supported and enabled" in and P. Status Broadcom 69 PL l 22 S P 29 L 22 Zimmerman, George "Other values of XD<3:0> with this combination of X_N and X_R shall have no effect upon the PHY." refers to other values spread over 2 paragraphs. Would be clearer to rewrite to specify the values here (related to unsatisfied comments i-292 and i-294 Replace "Other values of XD<3:0> with this combination of X_N and X_R shall have no effect upon the PHY" with "When X_N is deasserted and X_R is asserted, values of XD<3:0> other than 0001, 0010, and 0011 shall have no effect upon the PHY." P. Status M onsulting et al 23 PL YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 29 Li 22 Page 8 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

9 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 22 S P 29 L 33 Kim, Yong he table 22-1 changes existing MII that is bound by RD compatibility. Reverse the change and all 802.3cg PHYs should operate with MII as defined prior to any changes proposed by 802.3cg draft. nd reflect any downstream changes to the PIS table. RJ. No consensus to change NIO Status onsider with 497 MSR comment and presentation. l 22 S P 29 L 46 Jones, Peter hange "When X_N is deasserted, the assertion of " hange "When X_N is deasserted, assertion of" Proposed RJ. isco Status R D Z Very Late PL l 22 S P 29 L 46 Kim, Yong he text change meaningfully changes the interface behavior, where X_N is deasserted, X_R state was *specified* to be don't care, and with this change the interface cares the state of XR and XD when X_N is deasserted. his is clearly an interface definition change, and violates the use of MII as compatibiltiy interface. Reverse the change and all 802.3cg PHYs should operate with MII as defined prior to any changes proposed by 802.3cg draft. nd reflect any downstream changes to the PIS table. RJ. No consensus to change NIO Status onsider with 497 MSR comment and presentation. R 500 Very Late his comment was WIHDRWN by the commenter. YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 29 Li 46 Page 9 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

10 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 22 S P 29 L 47 Zimmerman, George "When X_N is deasserted, the assertion of the X_R signal shall not affect the transmission of data when a PHY is operating at 10 Mb/s (with the exception of 10BS-1S and 10BS- 1L), or when X_N is deasserted." isn't quite correct, and should not be a parenthetical. It is part of the shall. the exception is actually only in conjunction with the XD values specified in table 22-1, not in general for 10BS-1S and 10BS-1L, but for 10BS-1S operating with PL and 10BS-1L operating with. (related to comment i-295 unsatisfied) hange "When X_N is deasserted, the assertion of the X_R signal shall not affect the transmission of data when a PHY is operating at 10 Mb/s (with the exception of 10BS-1S and 10BS-1L), or when X_N is deasserted." to "he assertion of X_R signal shall not affect the transmission of data for PHYs operating at 10 Mb/s except in any of the following cases: when X_N is deasserted, when 10BS- 1S is operating with PL and XD<3:0> equals 0010 or 0011, or when 10BS-1L is operating with capability and XD<3:0> equals 0001 (See able 22-1)." LSO - rewrite PIS SF18 to match. P IN PRINIPL. Status M onsulting et al Replace, "When X_N is deasserted, the assertion of the X_R signal shall not affect the transmission of data when a PHY is operating at 10 Mb/s (with the exception of 10BS-1S and 10BS-1L), or when X_N is deasserted." with, "ssertion of the X_R signal shall not affect the transmission of data when X_N is deasserted. dditionally, the assertion of X_R signal shall not affect the transmission of data when a PHY is operating at 10 Mb/s with the exception of 10BS-1L and 10BS-1S." ditorial license to update PIS SF18 to match and show changes relative to the base standard. 24 l 22 S P 30 L Kim, Yong NIO PL he text change meaningfully changes the interface behavior, where RX_N is deasserted, RX_R state was *specified* to be don't care, and with this change the interface cares the state of RX_R and RXD when RX_N is deasserted. his is clearly an interface definition change, and violates the use of MII as compatibiltiy interface. Reverse the change and all 802.3cg PHYs should operate with MII as defined prior to any changes proposed by 802.3cg draft. nd reflect any downstream changes to the PIS table. RJ. No consensus to change Status onsider with 497 MSR comment and presentation. l 22 S P 30 L 7 Zimmerman, George R 25 Very Late " for the definition and usage of PL BON and OMMI." appears to be in a smaller font than the rest of the paragraph. hange the font size to match the paragraph style. P. Status Master comment 25. Resolve with 194. M onsulting et al l 22 S P 30 L 7 [SY] See for. OMMI. (too small font size) See for. OMMI. (adjust font size as for normal text) P. Status Master comment 25. Resolve with Z Z YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 30 Li 7 Page 10 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

11 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 22 S P 30 L 18 Kim, Yong he table 22-2 changes existing MII that is bound by RD compatibility. Reverse the change and all 802.3cg PHYs should operate with MII as defined prior to any changes proposed by 802.3cg draft. nd reflect any downstream changes to the PIS table. RJ. No consensus to change NIO Status onsider with 497 MSR comment and presentation. l 22 S P 31 L 6 nslow, Pete R Very Late he heading number for "Major capabilities/options" should be (as per the editing instruction). hange the heading number for "Major capabilities/options" to P. iena Status l 22 S P 31 L 20 nslow, Pete he heading for should not contain "(continued)" Delete "(continued)" from the heading for P. iena Status 91 Z Z l 22 S P 31 L 23 [SY] as as (add space) P. Status l 22 S P 31 L 29 nslow, Pete PIS item SF15 is being deleted. his has the effect of renumbering all of the PIS items with numbers above 15. Show SF18 as changing to SF17 and change the inserted items to be SF38 through SF40 P. iena Status l 22 S P 31 L 34 [SY] at10 Mb/s at 10 Mb/s (add space) P. Status Master comment 196. Resolve with Z Z Z YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 31 Li 34 Page 11 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

12 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 22 S P 31 L 34 Zimmerman, George PIS SF18 - missing space between "at10 Mb/s" change to "at 10 Mb/s" P. Status Master comment 196. Resolve with 196. M onsulting et al l 22 S P 31 L 39 nslow, Pete "*PL:M" should be "PL:M" (no *) hange "*PL:M" to "PL:M" (3 instances) P. iena Status l 30 S P 34 L 3 nslow, Pete Since the whole of able 30-1c is shown in the draft, the editing instruction should be much simpler Replace the editing instruction with: "hange able as follows:" P. iena Status Z Z Z l 30 S P 34 L 35 nslow, Pete Make the style of the changes to able 30-1c follow the style of the in-force table For the block of inserted rows, remove the cell borders in the 3 blocks of columns on the right hand side. For all of the rows below the inserted rows (arepeaterid onwards) remove the cell borders for the columns for "PHY rror Monitor apability (optional)" and "PL apability (optional)" P. iena Status l 30 S P 35 L 38. in PPROPRI SYNX section of.. in PPROPRI SYNX in section of. (add "in") P IN PRINIPL. Status Replace, "new entries in PPROPRI SYNX section" with, "new entries in the PPROPRI SYNX section" l 30 S P 35 L 46. in PPROPRI SYNX section of.. in PPROPRI SYNX in section of. (add "in") P IN PRINIPL. Status Z Z Z Replace, "new entries in PPROPRI SYNX section" with, "new entries in the PPROPRI SYNX section" YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 35 Li 46 Page 12 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

13 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 30 S P 36 L 18 nslow, Pete s pointed out by comment 36 against D2.0: he web page: says: "In I Std the spelling 'behaviour' is used throughout MIB clauses and their associated nnexes, and in any references to the behaviours defined there." hange "behavior" to "behaviour" P IN PRINIPL. iena Status Perform a global search for "behavior" and replace with "behaviour" l 30 S P 36 L 26 hompson, Geoff R BHVIOUR definition not sufficiently precise. Is this the results of an (undefined) test or is it whether or not the relevant state machine is enabled or clamped? Is the test independent of the contros or just an indicator of how the controls are set. xpand the definition so it is prescisely known what drives the attribute. P IN PRINIPL. Insert second sentence on line 28, "aplstatus is driven by the plca_status variable of the PL Status state diagram specified in " Make a cross-reference. Status GraaSI S Z PL l 30 S P 36 L 38 hompson, Geoff R his ION alone should not be alone be able to turn on PL. ll of the other requirements, e.g. half-duplex need to be met as well. xpand the definition to accurately reflect how it should work. P IN PRINIPL. Status GraaSI S.. Replace, "Setting acpldminontrol to the enabled state will result in alteration of the Reconciliation Sublayer behaviour to follow lause 148 provided the PHY implements and enables optional lause 148 PL.;" with, "Setting acpldminontrol to the disabled state sets the variable plca_en to FLS and disables the PL functionality specified in lause 148. Setting acpldminontrol to the enabled state sets the variable plca_en to RU in Figure 148-4, Figure 148-5, and Figure ;" l 30 S P 37 L 11. to define highest node ID.. to define the highest node ID. (add "the") P. Status l 30 S P 37 L 31 hompson, Geoff R BHVIOUR definition not completely clear. dd clarifying text hange 1st sentence to read: "...PL transmit opportunities for a specific LocalNodeID." P. Status GraaSI S PL Z PL YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 37 Li 31 Page 13 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

14 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 30 S P 37 L 33 nslow, Pete ccording to the rules set out in: "In text, where this improves clarity, follow the I ditorial Style Manual: Use spaces instead of commas between numbers in tens or hundreds of thousands (e.g., , , but 4000)." hange "65535" to "65 535" P. iena Status l 30 S P 37 L 33 Regev, lon "expressed as a the duration" should be "expressed as the duration" change "expressed as a the duration" to "expressed as the duration" P. Status Keysight echnologies l 30 S P 37 L 44. in PPROPRI SYNX section of.. in PPROPRI SYNX in section of. (add "in") P IN PRINIPL. Status Replace, "new entries in PPROPRI SYNX section" with, "new entries in the PPROPRI SYNX section" Z Z Z l 30 S P 37 L 46 nslow, Pete omment 41 against D2.0 was: P IN PRINIPL Replace, "Insert the following new entries in PPROPRI SYNX after the entry for "1000BS-":" with, "Insert the following new entries in the PPROPRI SYNX section of after the entry for "10BS-S":" hange "1000BS-" to "10BS-S" P IN PRINIPL. iena Status Replace "1000BS-" with "10BS-FL" l 45 S 45.2 P 39 L 20 hompson, Geoff "Namely" is not standards style grammar. Replace "namely 10BS-1S" with "(that is 10BS-1S)" P IN PRINIPL. Master comment 70. Resolve with 70. Delete ", namely 10BS-1S," Status GraaSI S.. l 45 S 45.2 P 39 L 20 Slavick, Jeff here is no reason to include the ", namely 10BS-1S," text unless this is going to be the only PHY to ever use PL. Delete ", namely 10BS-1S," P. Status Broadcom Syntax ditorial ditorial Master comment 70. Resolve with 335. YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 39 Li 20 Page 14 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

15 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 45 S 45.2 P 39 L 23 nslow, Pete he editing instruction does not say where to put the new row and the ")" is missing from the end. hange: "hange the row for 14 through 28 and insert new row in able 45-1 as follows (unchanged rows not shown:" to: "hange the row for 14 through 28 and insert a new row below the changed row in able 45-1 as follows (unchanged rows not shown):" P. iena Status l 45 S 45.2 P 39 L 37 nslow, Pete he editing instruction does not say where to put the new row. hange: "hange the row for m.6.12:0 and insert new row in able 45-2 as follows (unchanged rows not shown):" to: "hange the row for m.6.12:0 and insert new row above the changed row in able 45-2 as follows (unchanged rows not shown):" P. iena Status l 45 S 45.2 P 39 L 49 nslow, Pete his should show "m.6.12:0" changing to "m.6.11:0" but it shows "m.12:0" changing to "m.11:0" Replace with "m.6.1<u>1</u><s>2</s>:0" Where <u> and </u>b are the start and end of underline font and <s> and </s> are the start and end of strikethrough font P. iena Status Z Z Z l 45 S P 40 L 3 [SY] Font size of 45-3 does not fit. djust font size to normal text font size. P. Status l 45 S P 40 L 15 nslow, Pete he last 4 register addresses shown in able 45-3 are: BS-1L test mode control BS-1S PM control BS-1S PM status BS-1S test mode control but the registers shown in e through h are: BS-1L test mode control BS-1S PM control BS-1S PM status BS-1S test mode control he first three of these do not match. ither change the entries in able 45-3 or the values in the corresponding subclauses so that the values match. P IN PRINIPL. iena Status No change to clause required (this address numbering was implemented as a result of comment 471 against d2p0). Other comments (209, 212, and 214) have been submitted to fix the address numbering in subclauses e f, anf g Z Z YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 40 Li 15 Page 15 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

16 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 45 S P 40 L 19 [MDIO RGISRS] Register address is unaligned with the other management registers in table Please move register in this table up to address , as this has been done for the other 10BS-1L and 10BS-1S registers from D2.0 to D2.1 and afterwards change the other occurances of register in D2.1 to the new register address P IN PRINIPL. Status hange register address as follows: BS-1S test mode control hange reserved row to through Registers l 45 S a P 41 L 22 nslow, Pete he editing instruction has the incorrect end heading number. he new headings start at c, but this should be a In the editing instruction, change " h" to " f" Renumber c through h to be a through f P IN PRINIPL. iena Status Master comment 206. Resolve with 206 and 27. hange diting instruction from, " a through h" to a through f" Start clause numbering on line 32 at a (not c). 104 Z Search for the documents for occurances of register and change to new register address l 45 S P 40 L Verify that the links in able 45-3 updated correctly. Verify the correct links in the lause 45 PIS (page 125, line 3, page 133, line 21, page 139, line 24, page 141, line 6, page 144, line 32), lause 146 PIS (page 183, line 11, page 187, line 10), and lause 147 PIS (two locations). [SY] Font size of does not fit. Z l 45 S P 41 L 22 nslow, Pete iena 102 djust font size to normal text font size. Inappropriate editing instruction: "hange the paragraph for bits :0 as follows:" Z P. Status Replace with "hange the text of as follows:" l 45 S P 41 L P. Status [SY] Font size of does not fit. Z djust font size to normal text font size. P. Status YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 41 Li 22 Page 16 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

17 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 45 S P 41 L 25 nslow, Pete he new sentences "When these bits are set to 0010, the mode of operation is 10BS- 1L. When these bits are set to 0011, the mode of operation is 10BS-1S." are not in the correct place. Move the two new sentences to be after "When these bits are set to 0001, the mode of operation is 1000BS-1." P. Status Master comment 103. Resolve with 205. iena l 45 S P 41 L 25 [MDIO RGISRS] Ordering of 10BS-1L, 10BS-1S, 100BS-1 and 1000BS-1 is reversed in the text compared to able Move underlined (new) sentences below the sentence describing 1000BS-1 to stay in order with able P. Status Z Z l 45 S a P 41 L 30 Zimmerman, George diting instruction and numbering of subclauses is messed up - says "Insert a through h after as follows:" but there are only 6 subclauses. hey should be 186a through 186f, but are currently labeled 186c through 186h. hange editing instruction to read "Insert a through f after as follows:" and renumber c as a, (and subsequently change 186d to 186b, 186e to 186c, 186f to 186d, 186g to 186e, and h to f). P IN PRINIPL. Status M onsulting et al Master comment 206. Resolve with 206 and 104. hange diting instruction from, " a through h" to a through f" Start clause numbering on line 32 at a (not c). Verify that the links in able 45-3 updated correctly. Verify the correct links in the lause 45 PIS (page 125, line 3, page 133, line 21, page 139, line 24, page 141, line 6, page 144, line 32), lause 146 PIS (page 183, line 11, page 187, line 10), and lause 147 PIS (two locations). 27 Z Master comment 103. Resolve with 103. YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 41 Li 30 Page 17 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

18 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 45 S P 41 L 30 [MDIO RGISRS] Insert a through h after as follows: Insert a through f after as follows: (it is three 10BS-1L and three 10BS-1S registers, so six PM registers in total, numbered from a to f). Rename also chapters c to h to start with a, rename also the references in able 45-3 and in other positions of the document (lause 45 PIS, several times, page 125, line 3, page 133, line 21, page 139, line 24, page 141, line 6, page 144, line 32, lause 146 PIS, several times, page 183, line 11, page 187, line 10, lause 147 pics, two times). P IN PRINIPL. Status Master comment 206. Resolve with 104 and 27. hange diting instruction from, " a through h" to a through f" Start clause numbering on line 32 at a (not c). Verify that the links in able 45-3 updated correctly. Verify the correct links in the lause 45 PIS (page 125, line 3, page 133, line 21, page 139, line 24, page 141, line 6, page 144, line 32), lause 146 PIS (page 183, line 11, page 187, line 10), and lause 147 PIS (two locations). 206 Z l 45 S c.1 P 42 L 16 hompson, Geoff R he text "shall be ignored" is untestable. Replace with: "Reads for all other bits are indeterminate and shall be considered invalid" P IN PRINIPL. Status GraaSI S.. Replace, "Reads for all other bits shall be ignored." with, "Reads for all other bits are indeterminate and the values are invalid." ditorial license to align new text with PIS, if needed. l 45 S c.1 P 42 L 17 Beruto, Piergiorgio dd "NO-" to the warning at line 17 to make it look uniform with c.4 line 48. Replace "his operation may interrupt data communication" with "NO -- his operation may interrupt data communication." P. Status anova ech Srl PM ditorial l 45 S c P 41 L l 45 S c.3 P 42 L 34 nslow, Pete iena 105 functionality Z " " should be a cross-reference Z config value (match description to description of clause c.5). Make " " a cross-reference (2 instances) Status P IN PRINIPL. P. Status Replace " functionality" with " config value" in three locations for bit YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 42 Li 34 Page 18 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

19 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 45 S c.4 P 42 L 44 hompson, Geoff R he behavior coming out of sleep is not implementation specific, it is governed by what happens upon reset. Fix text. RJ. Status GraaSI S.. While often confused with sleep mode or mode, low-power mode is neither. It is a standard low-power state where the PHY is only responsive to MDIO, and exit requires a reset (and therefore retraining, per the PHY control diagram). It is mirrored in the PM control bit , the PM/PMD control 1 register - common to most PHYs. he lowpower mode functionality specified in 802.3cg is specified in other PHY clauses throughout 802.3, including clause 28, clause 36, clause 37 and clause 97 (1000BS-1), with identical or nearly identical specification of the implementation-specific nature of the function. ommenter and hair are encouraged to submit a maintenance request to deal with this confusion globally. l 45 S c.6 P 43 L 14 hompson, Geoff R What is thw point of having loopback with the MDI connector disconnected? If you are going to unplug the media you can plug in a shorting connector. hange to say that loopback will disconnect the receive circuit and loop it to the transmit circuit. P IN PRINIPL. Status R U GraaSI S PM PM l 45 S d.3 P 44 L 11 low-power feature (2 occurences in this line) low-power ability (low power ability is the wording used at other positions, so this should be aligned to the rest of the text). P IN PRINIPL. Status Replace, "low-power feature" with "low-power ability" in two locations. l 45 S d.7 P 44 L 32 hompson, Geoff R Doesn't say whether the indication is latching or not. Needs to be specified. I would suggest latching. Latch could be cleared by cycling the bit. Modify text accordingly P IN PRINIPL. Status dd, "he receive fault bit shall be implemented with latching high behavior." as the last sentence in d.7 hange "RO" to "RO/LH" for bit in able b and add acronym for LH in able b footer. ditorial license to new create PIS (use MM181 as a template) GraaSI S Z PM Delete, "Loopback operation shall be with the MDI open and not connected to media." on lines ditorial license to adjust PIS, if needed. YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 44 Li 32 Page 19 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

20 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 45 S e.1 P 45 L 11 [MDIO RGISRS] Register is not reflecting the 10BS-1L test mode control register after renumbering from D2.0 to D2.1. hange all instances of to within lauses e, able c and e.1 (in total 6 instances). heck also other lauses (1 instance in , page 139, line 23 and 1 instance in , page 160, line 10) P. Status l 45 S e.1 P 45 L 23 Jones, Peter incorrect cross reference hange "are described in " to "are described in " P. isco Status Master comment 414. Resolve with Z Z l 45 S f P 46 L 1 Regev, lon "ableable" should be "able" change "ableable" to "able" P. Status Keysight echnologies l 45 S f P 46 L 11 [SY] :13:12 and :9: :12 and :1 (replace 2 times a ":" by a "." and change register address to ). P IN PRINIPL. onsider with 212. Status Replace, "1.2299:13:12" with " :12" Z Z l 45 S e.1 P 45 L 23 [SY] is the wrong reference. 210 Z Replace, "1.2299:9:1" with " :1" Replace, "1.2299:11" with " " Replace, "1.2299:10" with " (this is the chapter about test modes in lause 146). Status P. l 45 S P 46 L 17 Regev, lon Keysight echnologies "PHYshall" should be "PHY shall" 19 Z Master comment 414. Resolve with 414. change both instances of "PHYshall" in the document to "PHY shall" Status P IN PRINIPL. Replace two occurances of "PHYshall" with "PHY shall" in on pages 56, line 17 and in on pages 56, line 24. YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 46 Li 17 Page 20 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

21 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 45 S f P 46 L 26 [MDIO RGISRS] Register is not reflecting the 10BS-1S PM control register after renumbering from D2.0 to D2.1. hange all instances of to within lauses f, able d and sub clauses (in total 30 instances). heck also the other lauses of 802.3cg for required register address changes (page 48, line 48, page 49, lines 1 and 2, page 63, line 49, page 64, line 5 and following (many instances there), page 187, line 10, page 198, line 32). P. onsider with 211. Status l 45 S f.1 P 46 L 39 nslow, Pete "his operation may interrupts communication." should be "his operation may interrupt communication." hange "interrupts" to interrupt" P IN PRINIPL. iena Status Master comment 379. resolve with 18 and 379. Replace "his operation may interrupts data communication" with "NO -- his operation may interrupt data communication." Z ditorial l 45 S f.1 P 46 L 39 Beruto, Piergiorgio dd "NO-" to the warning at line 39 to make it look uniform with c.4 line 48. Replace "his operation may interrupts data communication" with "NO -- his operation may interrupt data communication.". Please note that this fixes a typo as well (interrupts). P. Status anova ech Srl Master comment 379. resolve with 18 and 107. l 45 S f.1 P 46 L 39 Regev, lon hange "his operation may interrupts communication." to "his operation may interrupt communication." hange "his operation may interrupts communication." to "his operation may interrupt communication." P IN PRINIPL. Status Master comment 379. resolve with 379 and ditorial Replace "his operation may interrupts data communication" with "NO -- his operation may interrupt data communication.". Note that this fixes a typo as well (interrupts). Keysight echnologies ditorial Note that this fixes a typo as well (interrupts). l 45 S f.3 P 47 L 11 nslow, Pete iena 108 "NO-. he time" should be "NO-he time" Z hange "NO-. he time" to "NO-he time" (delete "." and a space) P. Status Master comment 108. Resolve with 213. YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 47 Li 11 Page 21 of /14/2018 5:25:37 PM

22 agement Parameters for 10 Mb/s Operation and ssociated Power Delivery over a Single Balanced Pair of l 45 S f.3 P 47 L l 45 S h.1 P 49 L 36 Jones, Peter isco 415 [SY] Note-. Z incorrect cross reference Z Note- (remove dot). hange "are described in " to "are described in " Status P IN PRINIPL. Status P IN PRINIPL. Master comment 108. Resolve with 108. hange "are described in " to "are described in " hange "NO-. he time" to "NO-he time" (delete "." and a space) l 45 S g P 48 L [MDIO RGISRS] Register is not reflecting the 10BS-1S PM status register after renumbering from D2.0 to D2.1. hange all instances of to within lauses g, able e and sub clauses (in total 24 instances). heck also the other lauses of 802.3cg for required register address changes (page 47, line 20, page 65, line 18). P. Status l 45 S g P 48 L 29 nslow, Pete Footnote a to able e should be just "RO = Read only" delete ", R/W = Read/Write," from footnote a to able e P. iena Status Z Z l 45 S P 50 L 18 nslow, Pete he name of register is 10BS-1S PS status in able , but it is 10BS- 1S PS status 1 in d ither change the name in able or in d so that they match. P IN PRINIPL. Status Master comment 110. Resolve with 386. iena Replace all occurances of "PS status 1" with "PS status" in b and d and able b and able d headers. l 45 S P 50 L 25 [SY] i is a wrong reference e (there are only 5 PS MDIO registers for 10BS-1L and 10BS-1S) P IN PRINIPL. Status PS Z Replace " i" with " e" YP: R/technical required R/editorial required GR/general required /technical /editorial G/general OMMN SUS: D/dispatched /accepted R/rejected RSPONS SUS: O/open W/written /closed U/unsatisfied Z/withdrawn SOR ORDR: Page, Line Pa 50 Li 25 Page 22 of /14/2018 5:25:38 PM