ICTを活用した英語アカデミック ライティング指導 Title : 支援ツールの開発と実践 水本, 篤, 染谷, 泰正, 山本, 敏幸, 浜谷, 佐和子, Author(s) 小山, 由紀江, 近藤, 悠介, 今尾, 康裕, 大野, 真澄, 濱地, 亮太, 名部井, 敏代, 山西, 博之

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ICTを活用した英語アカデミック ライティング指導 Title : 支援ツールの開発と実践 Author(s) 小山, 由紀江, 近藤, 悠介, 今尾, 康裕, 大野, 真澄 Citation 水本, 篤, 染谷, 泰正, 山本, 敏幸, 浜谷, 佐和子,, 濱地, 亮太, 名部井, 敏代, 山西, 博之 Issue Date 2017-03 URL http://hdl.handle.net/10112/11019 Rights 金星堂の許諾を得て作成しています Type Research Paper Textversion publisher Kansai University http://kuir.jm.kansai-u.ac.jp/dspace/

research article genre-based teaching 1 rhetoric 62

1. 1.1 genre as social action (Miller, 1984) John M. Swales discourse community (Swales, 1990, p. 58) Swales (Bhatia, 1993) discourse Swales English for Specific Purposes (ESP) ESP ( Tardy, 2009 ) 1.2 academic genre spoken written 63

1 1 (2016, p. 105) 3 a empirical research paper b review paper c theoretical, methodological paper 3 a 2. genre analysis 1 Swales (1990) introduction Create a Research Space CARS CARS move step 1 CARS Swales, 1990 1: Establishing a territory 2: Establishing a niche 3: Occupying the niche 1 2 3 CARS Swales (2004) CARS CARS 2 64

Move 1 Establishing a territory Step 1 Claiming centrality and/or Step 2 Making topic generalization(s) and/or Step 3 Reviewing items of previous research Move 2 Establishing a niche Step 1A Counter-claiming or Step 1B Indicating a gap or Step 1C Question-raising or Step 1D Continuing a tradition Move 3 Occupying the niche Step 1A Outlining purposes or Step 1B Announcing present research Step 2 Announcing principal findings Step 3 Indicating RA structure Declining rhetorical effort Weakening knowledge claims Increasing explicitness 1 CARS (Swales, 1990, p. 141) CARS ( : Bloor, 1999; : Brett, 1993; : Holmes, 1997) (,, 2016;,, Pho, 2013) (Ono, 2012, in press) (Kawase, 2015) 65

Move 1 Establishing a territory (citations required) via Topic generalisations of increasing specificity Move 2 Establishing a niche (citations possible) via Step 1A Indicating a gap or Step 1B Adding to what is known Step 2 (optional) Presenting positive justification (Possible recycling of increasingly specific topics) Move 3 Presenting the present work (citations possible) via Step 1 (obligatory) Announcing present research descriptively and/or purposively Step 2* (optional) Presenting RQs or hypotheses Step 3* (optional) Definitional clarifications Step 4* (optional) Summarising methods Step 5 (PISF**) Announcing principal outcomes Step 6 (PISF) Stating the value of the present research Step 7 (PISF) Outlining the structure of the paper * Step 2-4 are not only optional but less fixed in their order of occurrence than the others. ** PISF: Probable in some fields, but unlikely in others 2 CARS (Swales, 2004, p. 230, p. 232) 1 ( ) 2 ( ) 1A 1B 2 ( ) 3 ( ) 1 ( ) 2 * ( ) 3 * ( ) 4 * ( ) 5 ** 6 ** 7 ** * 2-4 ** 3 CARS (Swales, 2004, p. 230, p. 232; ) 66

3. reader-centerd 2 1 2 genre knowledge (Tardy, 2009) What & How Why 67

4. 4.1 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 1 (, 2008, p. 116) (, 2007, p. 11 ) 2 68

3 IMRD Introduction-Methods-Results- Discussion; - - - Introduction Conclusion topic-based 1 1 2 1 2 4 69

2 CARS CARS CARS CARS 1 Introduction CARS 2 3 CARS Anthony (2011, pp. 120-121) Investigating the Causes of the Space Shuttle Challenger Disaster Using Internet Website Resources 70

1 1 1: 1 The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) is perhaps best known for its Space Transportation System (STS), or Space Shuttle program. The Space Shuttle program began in the late 1970s with the aim to design a spacecraft that could... 2: 2 There have been many theories put forward to plain the Challenger disaster. Many of these theories also have little to no support, or are explained using inappropriate scientific principles. The official cause of the Challenger disaster was given in the Report of the Presidential Commission on the Space Shuttle Challenger Accident, As a result, few people have read the report confuse the general public with so-called misinformation or myths about the disaster. 3: 3 In this paper, we will examine four of the main causes In particular, we will look at weather patterns By explaining the disaster we hope that future scientists and engineers can understand the important role they have in preventing disasters of this kind. 1 Anthony (2011) 1 2 3 2 2 1 71

(, 2016 ) 5 CARS 1 8 2 1 CARS 6 CARS 72

4 5 CARS 1 CARS 2 3 4 1 2 3 4 peer feedback ( Liu & Hansen, 2002 ) 4 1 2 73

3 (, 2006) : 4 1 ( 2015) 4.2 CARS CARS 3 i genre awareness ii iii 3 74

Anthony, L. (2011). Writing up research in science and engineering: Foundations. Waseda University. 2006 Bhatia, V. K. (1993). Analyzing genre: Language use in professional settings. New York: Longman. 75

Bloor, M. (1999). Variation in the methods sections of research articles across disciplines: The case study of fast and slow text. In P. Thompson (Ed.), Issues in EAP writing research and instruction (pp. 84 106). Reading: Centre for Applied Language Studies, The University of Reading. Brett, P. (1994). A genre analysis of the results section of sociology articles. English for Specific Purposes, 13, 47 59. Holmes, R. (1997). Genre analysis, and the social sciences: An investigation of the structure of research article discussion sections in three disciplines. English for Specific Purposes, 16, 321 337. Kawase, T. (2015). Metadiscourse in the introductions of PhD theses and research articles. Journal of English for Academic Purposes, 20, 114 124. Liu, J., & Hansen, J. G. (2002). Peer response in second language writing classrooms. Ann Arbor: The University of Michigan Press. Miller, C. R. (1984). Genre as social action. Quarterly Journal of Speech, 70, 151 167. 2016, 23, 21 32. 2016 2007 Ono, M. (2012). A genre analysis of Japanese and English introductory chapters of literature Ph.D. theses. In C. Berkenkotter, V. K. Bhatia & M. Gotti (Eds.), Insights into academic genres (pp. 191 214). Bern: Peter Lang. Ono, M. (in press). Move-step structures of literature Ph.D. theses in the Japanese and UK higher education. Journal of Writing Research, 8(3). Pho, P. D. (2013). Authorial stance in research articles: Examples from applied linguistics and educational technology. Basingstoke, UK: Palgrave Macmillan. 2008 15 2015 29 76

Swales, J. M. (1990). Genre analysis: English in academic and research settings. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press. Swales, J. M. (2004). Research genres: Explorations and applications. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press. Tardy, C. M. (2009). Building genre knowledge. West Lafayette, Indiana: Parlor Press. 77